我写了篇英语文章,希望大家帮我找找语法错误As we all know the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,which will absorbed all over the world to pay attention to china.Olympic Games is grand sports competition with different althe

我写了篇英语文章,希望大家帮我找找语法错误As we all know the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,which will absorbed all over the world to pay attention to china.Olympic Games is grand sports competition with different althe
我写了篇英语文章,希望大家帮我找找语法错误
As we all know the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,which will absorbed all over the world to pay attention to china.
Olympic Games is grand sports competition with different altheles and people from their country.Because of this,the travel business will be taken to develop in china.Forigners will learn more about the chinese culture and become more and more like our country which has a long distance of history.
On the other hand ,with the development of economy in china,more and more forigers company will put their eyes in chinese apartment.I think we should hold this best chance.
All in all,as a chinese people ,we all welcome you to come to china!
这是一篇关于中国奥运会的文章其中有几个要点如下：
2008年奥运会将吸引外资,带动发展旅游业
中国应该抓住机会
望大家看后给我纠正错误.THANKS A LOT!o(∩_∩)o

我写了篇英语文章,希望大家帮我找找语法错误As we all know the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,which will absorbed all over the world to pay attention to china.Olympic Games is grand sports competition with different althe
楼上说的held没有问题
absorbe用原型,
a huge sport competition,
from their countries要加s,
travel business-不知道你说的是transpor
tation还是tourism.
more and more like-much more like
long distance of history- long history
forien companies
Chinese apartment?-China's government 还是什么?
catch this good chance比较好
as a Chinese people,I warmly welcome forien friends come to China.
还有,我觉得第一段改成As we all know,the 2008 Olympic Games,which will be held in Beijing,China,will absorb all over the world to pay attention to china.

第一行中held是hold的过去式 意思是: 把握, 把持力, 柄, 控制, 监禁, 掌握, 货舱
vt.
拿着, 保存, 支持, 占据, 持有, 拥有
vi.
支持, 保持, 有效
n.
控制, 保留