雅思作文观点批改DO the advantags of private means of transportation such as cars and motorbikes outweight the disadvantages cmpared to public transport(trains buses and taxis)?Give reasons for your answer.Indeed,private motor vehicles have so

雅思作文观点批改DO the advantags of private means of transportation such as cars and motorbikes outweight the disadvantages cmpared to public transport(trains buses and taxis)?Give reasons for your answer.Indeed,private motor vehicles have so
雅思作文观点批改
DO the advantags of private means of transportation such as cars and motorbikes outweight the disadvantages cmpared to public transport(trains buses and taxis)?Give reasons for your answer.
Indeed,private motor vehicles have some advantages.Compared with public transprt,it is more convinent and swifter for people to take private transport as they can avoid long waitting time and people can drive directly to the distination.Also,they are more comfortable than public ones.Specifically,air-conditioning and soft chair in private cars make people feel better comparing with crowding with people in a narrow room.
Hoever,the cost of maintaining private vehicles is high.Since the prive of petrol and car services gets higher,keeping cars or motobikes costs more than before.So,choosing public transport may save much moeny.Futher,as the number of private cars is increasing,traffic becomes busier and more congested.Therefore,taking private vehicles is likely to no longer faster than taking subway or air train.Besides,too many cars may lead to air pollution and much noise,which is negative to substantial environment development.

雅思作文观点批改DO the advantags of private means of transportation such as cars and motorbikes outweight the disadvantages cmpared to public transport(trains buses and taxis)?Give reasons for your answer.Indeed,private motor vehicles have so
Indeed,private motor vehicles have some advantages.Compared with public transport（拼错了）,it is more convenient(单词错了) and swifter for people to their own transports(redundancy,你用private太多了) as they can avoid long waiting（一个t） time.（这里断句比较好,太长了） People can drive directly to the destination(拼错了).Also,private trsnports (如果这里用They,they 指什么呢?) are more comfortable than public ones.Specifically,air-conditioning and soft chairs（椅子不止一张吧?） in private cars make people feel better comparing with crowding with people in a narrow room.
However(单词),the cost of maintaining private vehicles is high.Since the price(...) of petrol and car services gets higher,keeping cars or motorbikes(...) costs more than before,（前面有Since,只有半句,这里不用so）choosing public transport may save much moeny.Futher,as the number of private cars increases(后面是becomes?),traffic becomes busier and more congested.Therefore,taking private vehicles is less likely faster(这些表达好点) than taking subway or air train.Besides,too many cars may lead to air pollution and much noise,which has a negative influence(negative 一般修饰个名词 ) to substantial environment development
总体才说,这文章已经算是不错的啦.结构和语法还行,单词不要拼错..