初三英语作文____brings me happiness,我想填painting,帮忙组织下语言想写：画画可以让我放松画画可以让我发现生活中的美从中我学到了,生活中处处都有美,要善于去发现美请用初三英语水平,用英

初三英语作文____brings me happiness,我想填painting,帮忙组织下语言想写：画画可以让我放松画画可以让我发现生活中的美从中我学到了,生活中处处都有美,要善于去发现美请用初三英语水平,用英
初三英语作文____brings me happiness,我想填painting,帮忙组织下语言
想写：画画可以让我放松
画画可以让我发现生活中的美
从中我学到了,生活中处处都有美,要善于去发现美
请用初三英语水平,用英语说一下这三句话!
这是我之前已经写好的，谢谢When I draw something down,I may feel relaxed.SO I often relax my mind by painting .It's happy.In addition,it makes me find much more beautiful things in the life.I have learnt people should try to find out the beauty in the life by heart and they can bring us happiness from it.

初三英语作文____brings me happiness,我想填painting,帮忙组织下语言想写：画画可以让我放松画画可以让我发现生活中的美从中我学到了,生活中处处都有美,要善于去发现美请用初三英语水平,用英
上面三句话：
Painting relaxs me a lot.
Painting helps me to discover beauties in the life.
I have learnt from it that there are beauties beauty all over the life, and we need to be good at discovering them.
修改：
After I finish painting something, I will feel relaxed, hence I often relax my brain by drawing, which makes me happy. In addition, painting helps me discover more beauties in the life.I have learnt that people should try to find out beauties in the life by heart, which bring us a lot of happiness.
第一句没必要用过去时,may带有不确定性,不如用will.你这里应该是放松大脑,mind是想法,不是大脑,还有前后文提到画画时最好统一起来,painting和drawing不要混用.make有强迫的意思,用help好些.beautiful things是典型的中式英语,beauties即可.最后一句有点混乱,they是指代什么,people还是美丽?不如用定语从句统一起来.

i am ralax by painting.
i find the beauty in the life by painting
from which i leant ,life everywhere have beauty, by discovering beauty这是我之前已经写好的，帮忙改错一下！谢谢When I draw something down, I may...

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i am ralax by painting.
i find the beauty in the life by painting
from which i leant ,life everywhere have beauty, by discovering beauty

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Drawing makes me relaxed,and it can also let me find the beauty in life./Drawing not only makes me feel relaxed,but also brings me the ability to find beauty in life.I learn from drawing that beauty e...

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Drawing makes me relaxed,and it can also let me find the beauty in life./Drawing not only makes me feel relaxed,but also brings me the ability to find beauty in life.I learn from drawing that beauty exist in our life,as long as we have an eye of finding the beauty.

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Painting not only can make me relax but also can make me find out the beauty of life . I realise that we must be good with your eyes to discover the beauty of life from it.