帮忙找出对话的错误（英语）高手来T:hi,kim .Would you like to talk about me?K:I'd like to .I'm free nowT:OK,we are friend one year.But I didn't know anything about your family.Do you have brother or sister?K:NO ,but I have a sister not

帮忙找出对话的错误（英语）高手来T:hi,kim .Would you like to talk about me?K:I'd like to .I'm free nowT:OK,we are friend one year.But I didn't know anything about your family.Do you have brother or sister?K:NO ,but I have a sister not
帮忙找出对话的错误（英语）高手来
T:hi,kim .Would you like to talk about me?
K:I'd like to .I'm free now
T:OK,we are friend one year.But I didn't know anything about your family.Do you have brother or sister?
K:NO ,but I have a sister not bloodrelation.
T:Does she love you?
K:她对我就像对她的亲弟弟一样
T：That‘s good.I have a sister.She is older than me.She loves me too.She was married and she has a child now.Her child is very cleaver.I gived you the picture.Do you remember?
K:yeah.He is a strong boy.And very lovely.By the way.What are you parents do?你方便说吗?
T：I remember I told you.My father is policeman.My mother is a employee in a company.And What about you
K:My parents are businessman.My father is busy.My mother is leasurer than my father.
T:wow,That's cool.Does your family have a pet?
K:yeah,Some year ago.I have a dog.But it was dead
T:OH.I'm sorry to hear that.I had a dog too.But I losed it.
I aways miss it.
K：oh~I understand.rean,we studied here half year.Do you want to go home?
T：ofcouse I want to go home.我觉得我就像块电池,家就像我的充电器,长时间不回家就会变的无精打采.
K：hm~me too.Don't worry.We shortly go home .
T:yeah..
就这些了 麻烦帮我把错误的地方修改下 两另外把其中的中文翻译成英文（谢绝金山） ..捣乱的就算了

帮忙找出对话的错误（英语）高手来T:hi,kim .Would you like to talk about me?K:I'd like to .I'm free nowT:OK,we are friend one year.But I didn't know anything about your family.Do you have brother or sister?K:NO ,but I have a sister not
T:Hi,Kim .Would you like to talk to me?
K:I'd like to.I have time.
T:OK.We have been friends for a year now,but I still don't know anything about your family.Do you have any brothers or sisters?
K:Well,I have a sister that is not blood-related.
T:Does she love you?
K:She treats me as her youger brother.
T：That's nice.I have a older sister.She loves me very much.She was married and has a kid now.Her boy is very cleaver.I gived you a picture.Do you remember?
K:Yeah.He is a strong boy and very lovely too.By the way,what do you parents do?Are you ok if we talk about it?
T：Sure,though I remember I told you before.My father is police officer.My mother is a employee in a company.What about yours
K:My parents are businessmen.They are all so busy,but my mother has more free time with me than my father.
T:Wow,That's cool.Does your family own a pet?
K:Yeah,Several years ago I had a dog.But he/she passed away.
T:OH.I'm sorry to hear that.I had a dog too.But I lost him/her.
I aways miss him/her.
K：I understand.Rean,we have been here for six months(半年?还是你打错了?）,do you want to go home?
T：of couse I do.I feel like a battery,and home is like my recharger; if I don't go home any sooner I would be out of charge.
K：Hmm,me too.Don't worry.Let's go home .
T:Yeah,Let's.
既然家里养狗,那么一定爱狗啰,那就不要用it,用he or she就像是指人一样.
修改了一堆语法错误,把句子尽量口语化,替换了一些不合适的词,但原句意思不变.

T:hi, kim .Would you like to talk with me?
K:I'd like to . I'm free now
T:OK, we have been friend for one year.But I don't know anything about your family. Do you have brother or sister?
K...

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T:hi, kim .Would you like to talk with me?
K:I'd like to . I'm free now
T:OK, we have been friend for one year.But I don't know anything about your family. Do you have brother or sister?
K:Well,I have a sister that is not blood-related.
T:Do you get along well with each other?
K:yes, she treats me just like her own younger brother
T：That‘s good。 I have a elder sister. She loves me too.She has been married and has a child now. Her child is very clever.I have send you the picture.Do you remember?
K:yeah.He is a strong and lovely boy. By the way, What do you parents do? Is it convience to say?
T：I remember I have told you. My father is a policeman. My mother is working in a company. And how about yours ?
K:My parents are businessman。 My father is busy. My mother is not so busy as my father.
T:wow,That's cool. Do you have a pet?
K:yeah, Several year ago,I had a dog.But it was dead.
T: OH.I'm sorry to hear that.I have had a dog too. But I losed it.
I aways miss it.
K：oh~ I can understand the feeling。we have studied here for half year。 Do you want to go home？
T：ofcouse I want to go home. I feel like a battery, and home is my recharger. If I stay out of home for a long time, I will be laziness
.K：hm~me too. Don't worry. We will go home soon.
T:yeah..

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T:hi, kim .Would you like to talk about me?
K:I'd like to . I'm free now
T:OK, we have been friends for one year.But I didn't know anything about your family. Do you have brothers or sisters?<...

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T:hi, kim .Would you like to talk about me?
K:I'd like to . I'm free now
T:OK, we have been friends for one year.But I didn't know anything about your family. Do you have brothers or sisters?
K:NO ,but I have a sister not bloodrelation.
T:Does she love you?
K:She treated me as she everton-star brother
T：That‘s good。 I have a sister. She is older than me.She loves me, too.She was married and she has a child now.Her child is very cleaver.I gived you the picture.Do you remember?
K:yeah.He is a strong boy.And very lovely.By the way.What are you parents do? Be convenient for you？
T：I remember I told you before. My father is policeman.My mother is an employee in a company. And What about you ?
K:My parents are businessmen。 My father is busy.My mother is leasurer than my father.
T:wow,That's cool. Does your family have a pet?
K:yeah,Some year ago.I had a dog.But it was dead
T: OH.I'm sorry to hear that.I had a dog too. And I also losed it.
I always miss it.
K：oh~ I understand。rean，we studied here for half a year。 Do you want to go home？
T：of course I want to go home. I think I like the battery, the home resembles my charger, long time no home will become listless.
K：hm~me too. Don't worry. We shortly go home .
T:yeah..

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T:hi, kim .Would you like to talk with me?
K:I'd like to . I'm free now
T:OK, we have been friends for one year.But I haven't known anything about your family. Do you have brothers or sisters?...

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T:hi, kim .Would you like to talk with me?
K:I'd like to . I'm free now
T:OK, we have been friends for one year.But I haven't known anything about your family. Do you have brothers or sisters?
K:NO ,but I have a sister in law.
T:Does she love you?
K:She treats me as if I were her brother.
T：That‘s good。 I have a sister. She is older than me.She loves me too.She was married and she has a child now.Her child is very cleaver.I gave you the picture.Do you remember?
K:Yeah.He is a strong boy.And very lovely.By the way,what do your parents do? Could tell me if you please?
T：I remember I've told you. My father is policeman.My mother is a employee in a company. And What about yours ?
K:My parents are businessmen。 My father is busy.My mother is leasure than my father.
T:wow,That's cool. Does your family have a pet?
K:yeah,we had one some years ago.I had a dog.But it was dead
T: OH.I'm sorry to hear that.I had a dog too. But I losed it.
I aways miss it.
K：oh~ I understand。rean，we studied here half year。 Do you want to go home？
T：ofcouse I want to go home. I think I am just like a rechargeable battery,and my home is my battery charger.Being away from my home for a long time makes me in low spirits.
K：hm~me too. Don't worry. We'll shortly go home .
T:yeah..
就这些了 麻烦帮我把错误的地方修改下 两另外把其中的中文翻译成英文（谢绝金山） 。。高分相送 捣乱的就算了

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