百分悬赏一道改错题,对的再加100分.这个是开学第一道题,是高三水平的.我不会做但是希望能做上.做对的话外加悬赏100分.每行最多有一个错误,也可能没有错误.告诉我哪个错了就好.要告诉我

百分悬赏一道改错题,对的再加100分.这个是开学第一道题,是高三水平的.我不会做但是希望能做上.做对的话外加悬赏100分.每行最多有一个错误,也可能没有错误.告诉我哪个错了就好.要告诉我
百分悬赏一道改错题,对的再加100分.
这个是开学第一道题,是高三水平的.我不会做但是希望能做上.做对的话外加悬赏100分.
每行最多有一个错误,也可能没有错误.告诉我哪个错了就好.要告诉我为什么错.
We had guests last night who have not stayed
in a B&B hotel ago .They did not want breakfast
because that they were going out early in the
morning.They came back lately and had some
tea.I came into the living room and saw one of
them juse go through the kitchen door but turn
on the light.He was looking for a glass the
cupboard.He had no ideas that the kitchen was
not for guests.I just smiled to me and thought,
"what can I do?We are guests after all."
我的积分我不在乎……

百分悬赏一道改错题,对的再加100分.这个是开学第一道题,是高三水平的.我不会做但是希望能做上.做对的话外加悬赏100分.每行最多有一个错误,也可能没有错误.告诉我哪个错了就好.要告诉我
have - had
ago - before
because that - because
lately - late
but - and
turn - turned
the cupboard - in the cupboard
ideas - idea
me - myself

We had guests last night who have not stayed
in a B&B hotel (before) .They did not want breakfast
because that they were going out early in the
morning.They came back (late) and had som...

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We had guests last night who have not stayed
in a B&B hotel (before) .They did not want breakfast
because that they were going out early in the
morning.They came back (late) and had some
tea.I came into the living room and saw one of
them (just going) through the kitchen door but turn
on the light.He was looking for a glass (in) the
cupboard.He had no ideas (if) the kitchen was
not for guests.I just smiled to (myself) and thought,
"what can I do?We are guests after all."

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第一行have改成had，时态要一致
第二行ago改成before，ago要跟时间一起用
第三行的that去掉，because后边可以直接跟句子不用连词
第四行的lately改成late，lately是最近的意思，而late是晚了的意思
第五行没错
第六行turn改成turned，时态一致
第七行在glass和the之间加一个in，在杯盘里找一个杯子...

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第一行have改成had，时态要一致
第二行ago改成before，ago要跟时间一起用
第三行的that去掉，because后边可以直接跟句子不用连词
第四行的lately改成late，lately是最近的意思，而late是晚了的意思
第五行没错
第六行turn改成turned，时态一致
第七行在glass和the之间加一个in，在杯盘里找一个杯子，要有个介词
第八行的ideas改成idea，固定用法
第九行的me改成myself，我对对自己笑，而不是我对我笑
最后一行没错

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第三行because后的that是不是应该去掉啊

We had guests last night who have (never) stayed
in a B&B hotel (before) .They did not want breakfast
because that they were going out early in the
morning.They came back (late) and had...

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We had guests last night who have (never) stayed
in a B&B hotel (before) .They did not want breakfast
because that they were going out early in the
morning.They came back (late) and had some
tea.I came into the living room and saw one of
them (just going) through the kitchen door (and turning)
on the light.He was looking for a glass (in) the
cupboard. He had no (idea) that the kitchen was
not for guests.I just smiled to (myself) and thought,
"what can I do? (They) are guests after all."

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We had guests last night who have not stayed
have改为had。前面的had是一般过去时，后面所要描述的是客人在这之前，故应用过去完成时，即用had.
in a B&B hotel ago .They did not want breakfast
ago改为before.两者都是以前的意思.对比起来,before主要用于过...

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We had guests last night who have not stayed
have改为had。前面的had是一般过去时，后面所要描述的是客人在这之前，故应用过去完成时，即用had.
in a B&B hotel ago .They did not want breakfast
ago改为before.两者都是以前的意思.对比起来,before主要用于过去完成时,ago 主要用于一般过去时. ago 不能单独使用，应与three days (months , weeks)等连用, 而且和动词的过去时连用。
because that they were going out early in the
将that划掉。because后接从句，不需要加that.
morning.They came back lately and had some
lately改为late.因为late本身作为副词，就有“晚”的意思。而lately意思是“近来，最近”。与句意不符，而且一般适用于现在完成时的被动句和疑问句中。Have you seen Sam lately ?你近来见过山姆吗？
tea.I came into the living room and saw one of
这行没有错误。
them juse go through the kitchen door but turn
but改为and。根据句意，打开厨房门，接着打开灯，应该为连贯性，用and.而不是转折but.
on the light.He was looking for a glass the
the前面加in.根据下一行的cupboard可知，句子要表达的意思是“在橱柜里找杯子”，很明显，the的前面缺介词in.
cupboard.He had no ideas that the kitchen was
not for guests.I just smiled to me and thought,
"what can I do?We are guests after all."

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好长啊

We had guests last night who have not stayed guests后边添加here
in a B&B hotel ago .They did not want breakfast ago 改成before
because that they were going out early in the we...

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We had guests last night who have not stayed guests后边添加here
in a B&B hotel ago .They did not want breakfast ago 改成before
because that they were going out early in the were going 改成went
morning.They came back lately and had some lately 改成late
tea.I came into the living room and saw one of
them juse go through the kitchen door but turn but改成then
on the light.He was looking for a glass the a glass 后边 加in
cupboard.He had no ideas that the kitchen was ideas 改成idea
not for guests.I just smiled to me and thought, me 改成them
"what can I do?We are guests after all." we 改成they
自己做的不一定准确，wish i could help you

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1 have改为had 过去完成时
2 ago 这个单词通常用在过去时，不各完成时边用。
3 that 是多余的
4 lately 改为later 根据句意判断
5 无错
6 but改为and
7 glass the 中间插入in
8 ideas改为idea 因为 have no idea是固定搭配
9 me ...

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1 have改为had 过去完成时
2 ago 这个单词通常用在过去时，不各完成时边用。
3 that 是多余的
4 lately 改为later 根据句意判断
5 无错
6 but改为and
7 glass the 中间插入in
8 ideas改为idea 因为 have no idea是固定搭配
9 me 改为him
10 we 改为They
做这种改错题，主要是要了解文章的意思。个人的一点拙见。
不知道是否全部正确，你最好还是再参考一下其它的答案。

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