作业帮请英语高手帮我看看这句英文写对没有?我想表达的意思是：成为行业中的优秀人才是我人生目标之一,也是我前进的动力,我会竭尽全力去实现这个目标!English:To become a excellent talent in profession
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请英语高手帮我看看这句英文写对没有?我想表达的意思是：成为行业中的优秀人才是我人生目标之一,也是我前进的动力,我会竭尽全力去实现这个目标!English:To become a excellent talent in profession
请英语高手帮我看看这句英文写对没有?
我想表达的意思是：
成为行业中的优秀人才是我人生目标之一,也是我前进的动力,我会竭尽全力去实现这个目标!
English:
To become a excellent talent in profession is one of my goals in the life,It is also a driving force for me.I'll try my best to achieve it!
请英语高手帮我看看这句英文写对没有?我想表达的意思是：成为行业中的优秀人才是我人生目标之一,也是我前进的动力,我会竭尽全力去实现这个目标!English:To become a excellent talent in profession
有一些小疏忽 excellent前面要加 an,完善后可以说：
To become an excellent talent in my profession is one of my goals in life.Moreover,it is the driving force for my progress.I'll make every effort(竭尽全力,不遗余力) to achieve it!
English:
Be in my life goal talents, also is one of my motivation, I will strive to achieve this goal!
a 错，改成 an，后面是excellent
profession 改成 industry，前者表示职业，后者是行业的意思
It is also a driving force for me
这句要好好改一下，可以和前一句合并成一句，前进没有翻译出来
最后一句没有问题
建议如下：
To become an excellent talent in th...
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a 错，改成 an，后面是excellent
profession 改成 industry，前者表示职业，后者是行业的意思
It is also a driving force for me
这句要好好改一下，可以和前一句合并成一句，前进没有翻译出来
最后一句没有问题
建议如下：
To become an excellent talent in the industry is one of my life goals and also a driving force for me to advance. I'll try my best to achieve it!
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To become a professional in my career is one of my goals in life.It is also a driving force for me.I'll try my best to achieve it!
a excellent talent in profession 换成a professional in my career
To become a excellent talent in profession
开头欠妥。有些累赘
改成：To become talented in my career 会更通顺。
To become an elite in my career is one of my goals in my life which pushes me forward to reach my goal.
As the industry's best talent is one of my goals in life and my motivation, I will make every effort to achieve this goal!
a变成an就行了，其他的都没有错了。
To become a professional genius is one of my goals in life, and it's also my driving force. I'll do my best to achieve it.
除了Ex前面要用An外，你的职业没有处理好。人生目标，不要用 The。
其他不错。