日记,请指点语法错误:When i woke up in the morning,I found the scab(结痂) on my face had off.我写的日记,说我上周做的激光祛斑,今天结痂掉了,已经前几天自己制作的名片,下午收到,效果很好.请指点语法错

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日记,请指点语法错误:When i woke up in the morning,I found the scab(结痂) on my face had off.我写的日记,说我上周做的激光祛斑,今天结痂掉了,已经前几天自己制作的名片,下午收到,效果很好.请指点语法错
日记,请指点语法错误:When i woke up in the morning,I found the scab(结痂) on my face had off.
我写的日记,说我上周做的激光祛斑,今天结痂掉了,已经前几天自己制作的名片,下午收到,效果很好.
请指点语法错误,
Today is Saturday,When i woke up in the morning,I found the scab(结痂) on my face had off.It really made me happy.You knew,since i had done the laser freckle(激光祛斑) treatment 7 days ago,I hadn't washed my whole face and hair by water for a week.It was terrible experience for me .
As the saying goes,rainbow after wind and rain.I deem that my suffering for a week were worth!I look forward to the good treatment effect after to months.
This afternoon,I received my business card,it was done/made by myself.The printing effect is so pretty,i was satisfied with the seller,then i will give the seller a good praise on taobao.
It's a nice day ,my mood is so nice too.(the end)
有几个笔误:I deemed....after two months.

日记,请指点语法错误:When i woke up in the morning,I found the scab(结痂) on my face had off.我写的日记,说我上周做的激光祛斑,今天结痂掉了,已经前几天自己制作的名片,下午收到,效果很好.请指点语法错
I found the scab(结痂) on my face had fallen off.
You know, since i had done the laser freckle(激光祛斑) treatment 7 days ago, I hadn't washed my face and hair for a week.
For me, It was an terrible experience.
Sunshine comes after the storm
I deem that my suffering for a week were worthwhile
I'm looking forward to the good treatment effect after two months.
my mood is so good

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Today is Saturday, When i woke up in the morning, I found the scab(结痂) on my face had off（我觉得disappeared更好些）. It really made me happy. You knew(know), since i had done(此处表时间，最好用一般过去时改为had,这里的had是使某事发生) the laser freckle(激光祛斑) treatment 7 days ago, I hadn't washed（因为前面since后的一般过去时，此处用过去完成时才对） my whole face and hair by water for a week. It was terrible experience for me . （这句话可以参考楼上的）

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